Does this paragraph sound coherent and lucid with good grammar? What should I fix up to make it sound flawless?:

"What I learned about this year in art is shading and the different types of it such as; standard, hatching, crosshatching, and stippling. My favorite part about art this year is the fun-filled activities and projects with groups and my least favorite part about it is the dull assignments that come with it. What I wish I could’ve done this year is to be a little more productive and work harder. What you could’ve done better to help me is to make sure I was well informed on certain assignments and projects so I could do them without any difficulties. Even so, I thought you were helpful enough and considerate. "



Does the response above fit the questions below? :

"In 1 paragraph, tell me what you learned about this year! (try to be specific and show that you actually learned it!) and what was your favorite part about art this year? What was your least favorite part? What do you wish you could have done this year? And lastly, what do you think I could have done better to help you this school year?"

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Answer 1

Answer:

I think it is great and you did everything they asked you for. Well done!

Answer 2

Answer: edits in bold

Explanation:

This year in art i have learned about shading, and different ways of doing it, such as; standard, hatching, crosshatching, and stippling. My favorite part about art this year is the fun-filled activities and projects with groups. However, my least favorite parts are the dull assignments that come with it. This year, i wish i worked harder and was a little more productive. To help me, you could’ve made sure I was well informed on certain assignments and projects so I could do them without any difficulties. Nonetheless, I thought you were helpful and considerate.


Related Questions

- This is a personal experience from a teacher: "I started University and then got married and had 3 kids before I graduated with my teaching degree. While I was pregnant with my second child, in my second year of school and working part time, I was explaining my frustrations to my mom about completing my degree. She responded with "nobody pays you for a half a degree and 2 years are going to come and go anyway, you'll either have your degree or not."
How does this advice relate to getting education, training or degree?

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Answer:

It basically says that without education or a degree you won't be able to find a job and become successful. It doesn't matter how difficult it might be because the outcome will be worth it.

Irony is a
between what is expected to happen and what actually happens.

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Answer:

disconnect is the correct answer

Explanation:

irony: a disconnect between what is expected and what actually occurs

its in the glossary

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MY day as a farmer'short story​

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Answer:

what is the question

Explanation:

imma have to come back to you on this one one cause u not giving a question for us to answer

Fill the following sentences with correct form of verb.

The policy is too old;_________ it to be revised.
The management team___________ to hire new warehouse workers.
If the customer_____________ four or more items from the catalog, offer a price reduction.
We should both____________ comfortable with the final decision.
The corporate directors a____________ full investigation.
The board of directors____________ approved the current ethics policy.
The regional manager and the district supervisor___________ all purchasing decisions.
The writer of a well-designed e-mail message___________ correct grammar and spelling.
The initial proposals the team submitted_____________ how hard they have worked.

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Answer:

The policy is too old; it needs to be revised.

The management team wants to hire new warehouse workers.

If the customer buys four or more items from the catalog, offer a price reduction.

We should both feel comfortable with the final decision.

The corporate directors recommend a full investigation.

The board of directors has approved the current ethics policy.

The regional manager and the district supervisor take all purchasing decisions.

The writer of a well-designed e-mail message knows correct grammar and spelling.

The initial proposals the team submitted reveal how hard they have worked.

Explanation:

The correct forms of the verb to fill the given blanks would be as mentioned above as they aptly follow the subject-verb agreement. According to the subject-verb agreement, the verb must agree with the subject in number and therefore, a singular subject takes a singular verb to agree and plural subject requires a plural verb. Since the sentences are in present indefinite tense(to denote universal truths, habitual actions, current actions, unchanging situations, etc.), the singular subjects would accompany verbs with s/es while the plural subjects would require the base form of the verb.

Discuss and give five reasons why watercolour is used for fashion and food illustrations.

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Answer:

Mixing of colour is easy on various drawing surfaces

Lifting is smooth which makes it easy to illustrate exactly what the person wants

Blending edges are quite perfect

Easy cleaning up is possible since it uses water

Less wasted paint which makes it commercially possible

Explanation:

hope this helps

How do we measure the value of love? What comparisons can we draw in how we view or
depict love? Cite evidence from this text, your own experience, and other literature, art, or
history in your answer.​

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Answer:

it is diferent for evryone

Explanation:

Love is an emotion. It can't be seen or touched, and it is experienced differently by everyone, therefore it is difficult to measure. Some think love can be measured by the amount of butterflies in their tummy. Others think love can be measured in bunches of flowers, or by using the words "for ever"

I need help with this

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Answer:

I think it is the third one (¬_¬")

Hope it helps =)

What does Semantic field mean?

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Answer:

Semantic field means a collection of words which are related to one another through similar meanings or to a topic

Explanation:

For example if a author is writing about the sea they will surely use words such as ocean,wave,tide,blue,storm and etc

Explanation:

A semantic field is a set of world (or dexemes) related in meaning. the phrase is also known as a world field, lexical field field of meaning and semantic system Linguist Adrienne Lehrer has defined semantic field more specifically e as a set of lexemes which cover a certain conceptual domain and which year certain specifiable relations to one another (1985).

Arush took baby steps to school. He was returning after a month of staying at the hospital, and he had strangely missed everyone—even the sternest of teachers. For Arush, anything was more fun than those white walls and the hard bed at the hospital. He was torn between the feelings of excitement and anxiety. On one hand, Arush was all better now; on the other hand, he had gained a lot of weight because of a long bed rest. He felt like an expansive balloon held to the ground by two fragile strands of threads. The doctors had told him he would be back in shape after exercising and eating better, but he was worried about how his friends would look at him. He had taken half an hour for a 10-minute walk because of his hesitation. Finally, he had arrived. There was no going back. He had seen the crowd. Arush saw the banner, the balloons, and the party hats. His friends had prepared for a celebration to mark his return. The crowd swarmed at him with the speed of bees whose hive had been stoned. They took turns asking him how he felt and saying that he was missed terribly. Nobody mentioned his weight gain or looked at him differently. His friends were genuinely happy to have him back. Gradually, Arush felt comfortable in his own skin. His feet felt more firmly on the ground. The negative ideas he had about himself shattered like pieces of broken glass. His mind was now a mirror that reflected things more clearly. He was indeed back. The author uses the phrase "shattered like pieces of broken glass" to show that A: Arush feels that he misses the stern teachers. B: the negative ideas have lost their grip on Arush. C: Arush understands the eagerness of the crowd. D: what Arush is thinking hurts his friends' feelings.

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Answer:

B: the negative ideas have lost their grip on Arush.

Explanation:

He has realised people are happy to have him back, and his negative thoughts 'shattered'.

Answer:

B. the negative ideas have lost their grip on Arush

Explanation:

i got it right

hope this helps

How was New Jersey divided and who had control?

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Answer:

Sir George Carteret & Lord John Berkley

Explanation:

They divided the land in half and gave control to two proprietors: Sir George Carteret (who was in charge of the east side) and Lord John Berkley (who was in charge of the west side). The land was officially named New Jersey after the Isle of Jersey in the English Channel.

Please answer this correctly

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Answer:

Broader

Notable Women

Notable African American female aviators

The life of African American

Aviator Bessie Coleman

Narrower

Explanation:

A group of 8 friends (5 giris and 3 boys) plans to watch a move, but they have only 5 tickets. If they randomly decide who will watch the movie,
what is the probability that there are at least 3 girls in the group that watch the movie?

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Answer:

5 girls will watch the movie

Explanation:

Answer:

Option D for plato users

Explanation:

D.  0.821

BEKAH:
I think we should talk about the meaning of the truck in the
story. It seems like a pretty important symbol of Charles's
freedom
SALAM:
That's not the interpretation I came up with. He's kind of
imprisoned by his truck because he has to work delivering
produce all day. How did you see it as a symbol of
freedom?
A. Synthesizing ideas
O B. Outlining a discussion plan
C. Challenging ideas
D. Keeping things moving

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Answer:

A

Explanation: They aren't outlining a discussion plan or keeping things moving so you can rule those out and be left with A and C. The answer is A because when you synthesize ideas with someone you are either finding something similar you believe or something different in what you believe. Which is what is happening what Salam asks Bekah why she sees it as a symbol of freedom.

what is the passive voice of my mother cooks tasty food​

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Answer:

Passive voice: food is cooked by mother

Explanation:

Write TRUE or FALSE for each of the following
statement
1. It's the green apple.
2.He has gone to see his mother yesterday.
3. Are you happy? Yes, I be happy.
4. The student is writes paper now.
5. Excuse me, can I borrow yours book?
6. Where do you like to work?
7. Which jacket is that? Paul's
8. It is fifteenth in March.
9. Will you run ten miles? Yes, but I haven't for a long time.
10. I was very angry, she was alone in sickness.
( 2points for each correct answer)​

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Answer:

1.true

2.true

3.false

4.false

5.false

6.true

7.true

8.true

9.false

10.false

which of the following is not considered a form of media
Maps
newspapers
bilboards
internet

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Answer:

The correct answer is Maps

the correct answer is maps

i want a paragraph about E-learning with using present continuous tense.
i really need it today :)

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Answer:

These days I am doing a French online course, which I am really enjoying. My French teacher, Marie, is giving classes through videoconference. Besides, I am having classes with my best friends - Carlo and Mark, so we are always laughing the whole class. In the course we are learning speaking, reading, listening and writing, just like an ordinary class! However, we are using interesting online material. Besides, Marie is continously posting interesting videos, books and magazines for us to enjoy learning in our free time.

Which answer shares a word part with the following word? Generation
Anticipate, genesis or hesitate

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Genesis because it has the part of the word gen

Which organism gets energy directly from the sun?

A- Earthworm
B- Bee
C- Tree
D- Hawk

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Answer:

Tree

Explanation:

All plants get energy from the sun to produce food to the animals

How does the setting affect Jonathan's outlook on his
house?
This newest miracle was his little house in Ogui Overside.
Indeed nothing puzzles God! Only two houses away a
huge concrete edifice some wealthy contractor had put up
just before the war was a mountain of rubble. And here
was Jonathan's little zinc house of no regrets built with
mud blocks quite intact! Of course the doors and
windows were missing and five sheets off the roof. But
what was that?
-"Civil Peace,"
Chinua Achebe
1. Jonathan is doubtful that his house will continue to
stand, since the surrounding area is war torn.
2. Jonathan is grateful that his house still stands,
since the surrounding area is war torn.
3. Jonathan is confused that his house still stands,
given the surrounding destruction.
4. Jonathan is guilt stricken that his house still stands,
given the destruction of the neighboring house.

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The correct answer is 2. Jonathan is grateful that his house still stands,

since the surrounding area is wartorn.

Explanation:

In stories, the setting includes the place where actions take place. Additionally, this factor has a great impact on the story and even the characters. In the case of the excerpt presented, the fact Jonathan house is almost intact while a huge nearby building was destroyed makes Jonathan feels grateful, this feeling can be seen in "This newest miracle was his little house in Ogui Overside" that shows Jonathan is surprised but happy or in "But  what was that?" that shows Jonathan appreciates the house was not destroyed even when there minor damages.

Answer:

B. Jonathan is grateful that his house still stands, since the surrounding area is war torn.

Explanation:

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Read the following excerpt from Alice's Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll and answer the question that follows.

Alice was beginning to get very tired of sitting by her sister on the bank, and of having nothing to do; once or twice she had peeped into the book her sister was reading, but it had no pictures or conversations in it, “and what is the use of a book,” thought Alice, “without pictures or conversations?”


So she was considering in her own mind (as well as she could, for the hot day made her feel very sleepy and stupid), whether the pleasure of making a daisy-chain would be worth the trouble of getting up and picking the daisies, when suddenly a White Rabbit with pink eyes ran close by her.


There was nothing so VERY remarkable in that; nor did Alice think it so VERY much out of the way to hear the Rabbit say to itself, “Oh dear! Oh dear! I shall be late!”

Based on the point of view presented in the excerpt, what does the reader know that Alice’s sister doesn’t know?

A.
White rabbits can speak.
B.
Alice is getting carried away in her imagination.
C.
Hot weather makes people of any age feel restless.
D.
Books without pictures are for children like Alice.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Based on the point of view presented in the excerpt Alice is getting carried away in her imagination the reader knows that Alice’s sister doesn’t know. Thus option B is correct.

What is an excerpt?

An excerpt is a section or section chosen out of a textbook, talk, play, etc., and studied as such. The excerpt's goal is to highlight important sections of a text in order to determine whether it has the details visitors need. An excerpt must be illustrative. It really should detail each of the article's main topics.

There was absolutely nothing VERY extraordinary about that, and Alice didn't find the White Rabbit saying, "Oh dear," to be at all strange.

According to the excerpt's standpoint, the reader can infer that Alice's sister is unaware that she is engaging in excessive imaginative play. Therefore, option B is the correct option.

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what type of clauses this sentence is? ( she likes to sleep in but she can get up early if she has work.​

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Answer:

She likes to sleep in is an independent clause

But she can get up early is a dependent clause

If she has work is a dependent clauses.

Everybody loves _______own dog better than other people’s dogs.

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Answer:

their

Explanation:

"Their" means belonging to that person. You don't say "everyone loves that own dog." This doesn't make sense.

"Everyone" means all the people. "Their" goes with a thing or things belonging to people, while "that" is referring to the person, not what belongs to them.

What is the tone of the PSA? Check all that apply.
informative
formal
friendly
silly
educational

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Answer:

Formal

Educational

Informative

(Maybe even friendly depending on the speaker)

Explanation:

Those 3 answers would be the tone of a serious and good psa

Answer:

formal

educational

informal

Explanation:

PLS don't take my answer off

Which of these rhetorical devices is mostly barely used here?

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The answer is C. Ethos.
Explanation: there are many rhetorical

How does Maniac keep John McNab from fighting with Mars Bar?

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Answer:

When a fight nearly broke out between John McNab and Mars Bar, Maniac stepped in and simply led Mars Bar away from the McNab home.

Explanation:

Maniac was instrumental in bringing Mars Bar to the McNab's home for the birthday party. But Mars Bar was uncomfortable being in a white home and the McNab family were uncomfortable having a black in their home. When the McNab boys played the game "blacks and whites", it made Mars Bar very uncomfortable.

Maniac's purpose of inviting Mars Bar to the birthday party was to teach Mars Bar about the white people and to teach the white about the blacks. But it wasn't actualized.

"Maniac Magee" is a story by American author Jerry Spinelli. The story's themes center on racism and inequality. It tells the story of an orphan boy who was looking for an abode and a home in the fictional town of Two Mills. Two Mills is a town which was torn between the East and West, blacks and whites.

What is the author’s purpose in using confetti as a symbol?


The confetti represents celebration. The author uses confetti to encourage her audience to celebrate success.

The confetti represents celebration. The author uses confetti to teach the students how to plan a celebration party.

The confetti is a symbol of college graduation. The author uses the symbol to reward college graduates.

The confetti is a symbol of summer internships. The author uses the symbol to encourage signing up for summer internships.

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Answer:

A. The confetti represents celebration. The author uses confetti to encourage her audience to celebrate success.

Explanation:

In the excerpt from Pat Mora's essay, the author was meant to deliver a talk to a group of graduating students in a restaurant. While preparing for her talk, she contemplated what gift she would give the students which would have a lasting impression on them. One of the non-monetary gift items she thought about was the confetti. The confetti was meant to be used for celebration by the students on each milestone attained by them.

Some of those milestones include, "those solitary moments when they had passed a test that worried them, finished a difficult paper at 2 a. m., or found a summer internship". Indeed the author encouraged the students to celebrate their little successes.

Answer: Option A

(A) The confetti represents celebration. The author uses confetti to encourage her audience to celebrate success. <=======+

Explanation:

Please answer this correctly

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Answer:

Broader

Generosity

Donating to charities

Animal - rights charity

Narrower

Answer:

Explanation:

Generosity: This can be giving things to others, volunteering, charities, etc.

Donating: This is a specific example of generosity

Animals: This is a specific charity

I need conversation among two or three persons about meditation​

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Answer:

WHAT IS MEDITATION?

Meditation is a practice where an individual uses a technique such as mindfulness, or focusing the mind on a particular object, thought, or activity to train attention and awareness, and achieve a mentally clear and emotionally calm and stable state.

IMPORTANCE OF MEDITATION.

1) This helps us to control our mind and thoughts.

2) It makes one happy.

3) It makes us to forget about our troubles. e.t.c.

EFFECTS OF MEDITATION.

1) It affects participants emotions.

2) It affects their minsets,e.t.c.

Explanation:

I hope it helps

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The following question references the novel The Three Musketeers by Alexandre Dumas.

Who is the principal antagonist of the novel?

a.
M. de Treville
c.
Milady (Lady de Winter)
b.
Athos
d.
Madame Bonacieux (Constance)

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Answer:

Milady de winter

Explanation:

hope this helps:)

Answer:

The answer is Milady (lady de winter)

Explanation:

Sorry a little late.  Got answer right on edg.

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