Hi can someone pls review my essay and give me any suggestions.
(It’s a personal narrative and the prompt was to write about a time you showed tenacity)

It’s the last game of the season, my last opportunity to show my skills and my knowledge. Basketball is a sport that involves skill and aim. Which is something I didn’t have, and therefore wasn’t the most brilliant one in the team. At first basketball seemed to be easy, but then I learned that it involved much more skills than I had. To everyone who plays basketball I just want to say, my respect because honestly it isn’t as easy as it looks. I showed tenacity while playing basketball, for I never gave up and I was persistent. After losing many games, I had a feeling that we were going to win this one. I was nervous because I wasn’t the best at basketball, I could dribble the ball but I wasn’t that good at shooting a basket. This game was very important to me and my team, because it was a home game and the last one of the season. My team wasn’t the best but also wasn’t the worst. The best players of my team were the tallest one, since they were the ones who could shoot a basket even someone putting their hands up. The players of my time were all nice, but when it came to games it was all serious. The basketball court was where everything happened, dribbling the ball across the court, stealing the ball from the opposing team, and shooting a basket. The court was shiny, and had many lines that were all worth different points and meant different things. This was the place where I doubted many times, but never quitted because I was determined to succeed. I had the feeling that this game was going to be like no other. My team and I were getting ready to play our last game of the season. Then it was finally time to start the game, it was the first quarter and I was one of the 5 players on court. I was running and I could feel my heart pumping blood, the ball was on our side and then I saw my teammate jump and score a basket. I felt so happy, but also I knew that we had to keep our guard up. Fast forward to the last quarter, my team and the opposing team are tied. I am playing in the last quarter of the game, and I can see everyone is tired but also they have a face that they want to win. I feel really but I am not going to quit. It’s the last minute of the game, and I have the ball. I am so nervous but also determined to shoot a basket to win. I am running towards and inside my head I picture scoring and winning. I come back to reality, jump and shoot a basket. I did it! I really did it! At the end of the day my team and I won. I am so glad that I never gave up, and I was able to help my team win.

Answer:

Explanation:

I would add some more to the line (Basketball is a sport that involves skill and aim.) such as It is also a sport for teamwork and self esteem. You should find a place for that. trust me I played baseball for the first say after 4 or 5 I started to play baseball and played for about 5 years and basketball has a lot of areas like baseball does because you have to learn to work with others. and also add It is a place to make freinds  find a place for those.

Narrate an incident where a friend hurt you terribly, but you were large-hearted to
forgive her.​

Combine the sentence below to create an adjective clause. The man is in a hospital. His car crashed. (I need an answer quick and will give brainliest to whoever answers first please)

Sample Response: Before a discussion, I
would be sure to finish the reading and make
notes about things I noticed. Then, at the
discussion, I would listen closely to others
and look for ways to add my ideas. I would be
respectful if I disagreed and ask questions if I
didn't understand.

How does your answer compare to the sample?

I included many of the same points.

How would you define "liniment" in your OWN words?

Which sentence uses the
semicolon correctly?
A. My head felt like it was stuffed; with tissues.
B. My head felt like it was stuffed with tissues;
from my congestion
C. My head felt like it was stuffed with tissues; I
was so congested

Which statement is FALSE about PSA's?
a. Promotes programs, activities, or government services
b. Market a product, not a message
c. Serve community interest
d. Featured on television, newspapers, billboards and online

Read the following topic sentence from an expository essay.
Helping your neighbors is one simple and powerful way to volunteer in
your community
Which supporting detail would best develop this topic?
A. Many scouting organizations sell cookies or wrapping paper in
their neighborhoods.
B. Fulkerson Junior High School has over 300 members in its Parent
Teacher Organization.
C. A civic organization is one in which members join together to help
make a difference in their community.
O D. A Park Street resident says she couldn't get to work until others on
her street shoveled snow from her driveway.

Kylie is working on a research project about an engine motor and how it runs. She wants to better understand the sequence of events in how a motor works.What reading strategy would best help Kylie understand this sequence of events?

What is it an example of when another text or event is referred to without directly stating it?
A
Alliteration
B
Rhetorical Question
C
Parallelism
D
Allusion