How is this poem...I made it myself. We had to make a poem for homework, tell me honest opinion. The poem is called "Estrella is..."
"Estrella is my little star
Shining bright
When I think of Estrella
I'm flushed with happiness
From head to toe
Estrella is the reason
Why I still walk this Earth
For if there was no Estrella
I would have been long gone
No longer connected to this world
Though we've never met face to face TwT
Is it wrong to wish for something more
Don't get me wrong; I love where we're at now
But I long for something more... because
Estrella is...
Smart, beautiful...
Kind, caring...best of all Estrella is
True to Estrella's self; which makes me like Estrella even more
My little star... Estrella
Oh, how I wish could meet you...
In person
To comfort you...
To hug you...
To beat up whoever hurts you...
But all I can do is...
Talk to you from a distance
But never fear
I will always be here; because
Estrella is...
My little star
And don't you forget it TwT"

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Answer 1

Answer:

3/5

Explanation:

I feel like this may be harsh but the poem doesnt have many rhetoric devices to capture a reader. Instead of smart, beautiful, kind, caring, I would suggest using imagery of Estrella that makes her that way. What makes her this way? Was she a animal lover, helped anyone in need, cook food for you? I would shorten the amount of adjectived to 3 becasue of the rule of three. I liked the repetition of "you" at the end of the poem. All in all, this is cute poem thou :)


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What do you think causes writer's block? Do you have any methods you use to overcome writer's block to get words on the paper (or on the computer screen)?

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Answer:

The cause of writers blocks can many different things, from anxiety, depression, pressure, a sense of failing those are you. This causes your brain to go into over time and you begin to over think everything you are doing.

Explanation:

Answer:

Overthinking or over analyzing what you have already written down, fear of not doing as well or better than you have written in the past, fear of how others will judge your work, substance abuse and mental health challenges, attention deficit, distractions in your work environment such as noise, clutter, bright lights and so forth, lack of rest, food or exercise could do it too. Parts of the brain responsible for creativity can sometimes be fatigued and underactive.

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C is the correct answer

he was able to campaign across the country on new railroad lines.

Dimmesdale cannot sleep and has visions. Besides angels, friends, and parents, who does he see and what do they do?
The scarlet letter, chapter 11.

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Explanation:

When Dimmesdale condemned himself before his congregation, how did the people respond? ... What were some of Dimmesdale's visions? Shining angels, ghosts of his dead friends, his father and mother, and Hester and Pearl. Where did Mr

PLEASE HELP ME
How does the rule of law affect the actions of government?
A. It allows government to expand its power.
B. It prevents government from abusing its power.
C. It prevents citizens from ignoring the government.
D. It ensures that citizens have a say in the government.

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Answer:

It prevents government from abusing its power

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can someone explain capulets and montagues rivalry in act 2 of romeo and juliet thank you

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Answer:

Basically, in Act 2, Romeo and Juliet are married by Friar Lawrence, in hopes of uniting the two factions. Romeo kills Tybalt(Capulet)  (he killed his friend, Mercutio, a Montague)  and now Romeo is banished. The Nurse and Juliet freak about this for a while, and Juliet is told by her father she is to marry a man named Paris despite being secretly married. Friar Lawrence gives Juliet a potion so she will go into a coma and appear dead so she can run off with Romeo. No one tells Romeo this. Romeo thinks she's really dead and kills himself. Juliet wakes up, finds out Romeo is dead, and kills HERSELF. This, weirdly, ends the Capulet's feud because they both realize they lost two kids to their irrational disagreement. This is forshadowed in the play's prologue  when they say "From forth the fatal loins of these two foes. A pair of star-cross'd lovers take their life; Whose misadventured piteous overthrows. Do with their death bury their parents' strife." (Shakespeare). Act 2 ends with this age old conflict being rectified and the two factions are now friends.

how has violence affected my life?
Do u think this is good?

How has violence affected my life? I can never really say that violence has affected my life, or say that it’s made me a difference in me as a person than I was before. Compared to the people who witness violence every day at home, or get abused mentally and physically in everyday life. Sure I’ve been called names by people or in school but I just don’t care, I don’t let things like that affect me I’ve learned to ignore people and continue with everyday life. What are the causes of youth violence? This is a thing that everybody asks teachers, principles, parents, and much more but do we really know? No. I've read many books on violence there's cyberbullying, there are photos that can affect people's lives, and many more.
My first thought, when I considered this question, was that violence had not affected my life in any meaningful way. However, the more I thought about it, I could see that violence has affected my life and the lives of those in my generation in many ways. We suffer because of increased crime and violence against kids. Violence has affected the way we live, play, and go about our daily lives. Teenagers in the generation before us could play outside all day as long as they made it home before the street lights came on. But my generation enjoys that kind of freedom because of violence. We don't play outside the way our parents did. We dont hang out at the malls, movies, and parks the way our parents did. We have learned to entertain ourselves at home and communicate through the new forms of media. Increased violence has forever changed the way we live.

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Yes that’s very good not gonna lie

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someone always has something to say about something someone does or say, no matter what you do. and if you can just take criticism without even sweating it, thats great.

Compare the interview" On the Front Lines with thurgood Marshall with the infromational piece equal justice under law thurgood marshall what key information is expanded on in the interview that is not deeply explored in the informational piece?

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Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

Compare the interview "On the Front Lines with Thurgood Marshall" with the informational piece "'Equal Justice Under Law': Thurgood Marshall". What key information is expanded on in the interview that is not deeply explored in the informational piece?

The interview gives more specific examples of how segregation in education is inherently unequal and unfair. The interview provides a more detailed account of the Supreme Court's opinion on Brown v. Board of Education. The interview includes Marshall's own struggle to get into law school which fueled his sense of injustice. The interview mentioned more about the opposition Marshall faced in the African American community.

Answer:

The interview gives more specific examples of how segregation in education is inherently unequal and unfair.

Explanation:

The interview is more detailed, as it shows the experience of a person who knows in depth, as he witnessed the effects of segregation on education. Through the interview, we were able to see the text information applied in the real world, which allows an extension of the meaning of the text's arguments. In summary, we can say that while the text provides the facts, the interview provides Marshall's insights and motivations.

In the story "Sweet, Difficult Sounds," why does Nothukula give up and stop reciting the poem? A. She forgets the words because she is focused on how her voice sounds. B. She is frustrated that no one else had to recite their poems aloud. C. She is frustrated that no one is paying attention to her.

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Answer:

C. She is frustrated that no one is paying attention to her.

Explanation:

Nothukula is a small girl who recites the poem. When she recite the poem she used to forget some lines and words. The whole class began to giggle. She remembers her teachers words that book covers don't whisper. Then she started to recite again and whole class acted as they are bored and amused. This further frustrated Nothuluka.

What news does Benvolio bring, and how has he learned this?


Juliet had a baby/ He saw it.


He said that Juliet is dead/ He saw her.


The Capulet's are having another party/ He received an invitation.

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Answer:

The Capulet's are having another party/ He received an invitation.

Explanation:

Benvolio learns about the capulet party, while the family servant is delivering the invitations. This servant is illiterate and is very confused by the task he received, allowing Benvolio to easily take one of the invitations for himself. Because of this invitation, he calls Romeo to the Capulet party, where he can find a new girl and forget his old love.

Which is sentence would you cite to support an inference that the effect of gravity would be gradual

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Hello. You did not provide the context to which this question refers. However, we can say that the effect of gravity is gradual in relation to the weight of a body. As the weight increases, the effect of gravity increases gradually and steadily. The same happens when a body has its weight reduced, and the effect of gravity also decreases gradually.

Thus, an inference you can make about the effect of gravity is that this effect is positively related to the weight of a body.


1. What is the subject of "My Name"? By Sandra Cisneros
(not the theme I need the subject)

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Answer:

the subject would be the same, the descriptions might be quite different because each used a different  It was my great-grandmother's name and now it is mine. Sandra Cisneros grew up in Chicago and now lives in San Antonio, Texas.

Mitch is writing a story about his visit to the zoo. His teacher said to use words that describe the sounds at the zoo.
Which sentence should Mitch use in his story?
O 1. The smell of the elephant house was very strong.
O 2. Amonkey took a banana and climbed up a tree to eat it.
O 3.
Two seals hit a beach ball back and forth using their noses.
O 4.
A great big lion roared like a freight train because it was hungry.

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Answer:

LUCKED UP

Explanation:

Answer:

4

Explanation:

Roaring is a sound

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Combine these parts to make a logical compound-complex sentence.

1. Lia gets scared very easily

2. She still loves watching scary movies

3. She often stays up really late watching movie marathons

Choose 1 answer:

(Choice A)
A
Although Lia gets scared very easily, she nevertheless loves to watch scary movies, and she will often stay up really late watching movie marathons.

(Choice B)
B
Lia gets scared very easily, but she loves to watch scary movies, and she will often stay up really late watching movie marathons.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

This is the best example of a logical compound-complex sentence.

Which of the following is an antonym of "good"?

A. poor
B. excellent
C. fine
D. well-behaved​

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Answer:

Poor

Explanation:

Antonym means opposite

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Somebody already answered correctly u can give them brainliest i will just get the points

1. Tonya walked into the crowded grocery store. The cashier stood behind the cluttered counter handing
change to a customer with a newspaper and a box of detergent. Five other people stood in line - a frozzled
woman with a gallon of almond milk, an elderly couple with a loaf of rye bread and a carton of eggs, and two
teenagers carrying cheese and crackers.
What point of view is this

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Answer:

3rd person

Explanation:

it is in third person view because the view is not within a person itself is from an outer stance of view

Which website citations are formatted correctly? Select three options.

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Answer:Organic Advocates, Home Composting, Future farmer of America.

Explanation:

Greene, Tom. Home Composting. Hanover Growers Guild, 15 March 2010. Web. 22 April 2011.

Lee, Kim. Stake Your Tomatoes. Future Farmers of America, n.d. Web. 24 June 2012.

Lawson, Jennifer. Put Down the Pesticides. Organic Advocates, 31 May 2013. Web. 3 January 2014

The Land Down Under. Australia Department of Tourism, 1 February 2013. Web. 14 June 2013.

The Johnstone family of Cheyenne, Wyoming has created a "family economy" in which members barter their services and homemade goods. The teenager's babysitting services are as valuable as dad's breakfast crepes. Even the youngest member has found ways to contribute by bathing the dog and tidying rooms (Ramirez 109).

Answer C,D AND, E

Explanation:I TOOK THE QUIZ I GOT A 100

How should references on a Works Cited page be arranged

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Answer:

In general, works cited lists are arranged alphabetically by the author's last name. If the author is unknown, entries are alphabetized by the first word in their titles (note, however, to drop A, An, or The). Titles of books, periodicals, newspapers, and films are italicized.

Explanation:

Answer:

in MLA format: Last name, First name. Title of book. City of publication, publisher, Date that it was published

Explanation:

Who is the most trustworthy in the book murder on orient Express

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Answer:

Pierre Michel

Explanation:

Pierre Michel is a Frenchman that has been employed with the company for over fifteen years and is considered quite trustworthy and honest.

Do you think writing is easy or difficult? (At least 8 sentences)

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Answer and Explanation:

Writing is a very difficult task. This is because writing requires a great concentration, perhaps writing is the activity that requires the highest level of concentration of an individual. This is because, first of all, it is necessary for the writer to be able to organize his own thoughts in a logical and understandable way. In addition, it is necessary that the writer be able to express these thoughts, paying attention to grammatical rules, literary resources and devices, punctuation and a series of other elements.

Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, black cat, Max

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Awe! i love this, enjoy life and family!

which headline sounds most credible?

a. "the next governor may be filthy rich"

b. "rich guy wants to lead state"

c. "governor's race ready for the big bucks"

d. " billionaire business tycoon to run for governor"

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Answer: d. " billionaire business tycoon to run for governor"

Explanation:

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Answer: B

Explanation:

Answer: B

Explanation:

Which two phrases in this excerpt from Alexander Pope's "An Essay on Criticism" follow the established rhyme scheme? Such shameless Bards we have; and yet 'tis true, There are as mad, abandon'd Criticks too. The Bookful Blockhead, ignorantly read, With Loads of Learned Lumber in his Head, With his own Tongue still edifies his Ears, And always List'ning to Himself appears. All Books he reads, and all he reads assails, From Dryden's Fables down to Durfey's Tales. With him, most Authors steal their Works, or buy;

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Answer:

The Bookful Blockhead, ignorantly read, with Loads of Learned Lumber in his Head.

Answer:

ignorantly read,

in his Head,

What is the remainder when 245 is divided by 9?

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9 ÷ 245 = 0 R 9 is the answer

Which point of view is used in this excerpt from “All Summer in a Day” by Ray Bradbury?

It had been raining for seven years; thousands upon thousands of days compounded and filled from one end to the other with rain, with the drum and gush of water, with the sweet crystal fall of showers and the concussion of storms so heavy they were tidal waves come over the islands. A thousand forests had been crushed under the rain and grown up a thousand times to be crushed again. And this was the way life was forever on the planet Venus, and this was the schoolroom of the children of the rocket men and women who had come to a raining world to set up civilization and live out their lives.

A.
first-person point of view
B.
second-person point of view
C.
third-person limited point of view
D.
third-person omniscient point of view

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the answer is b like the second one

Read this excerpt from “The Myth of Hercules.”

The goddess Hera did not forget about Hercules. She nursed her grudge for many years, waiting for an opportunity to make Hercules miserable. Hera watched as Hercules grew into a strong warrior. Hera cast a terrible spell on Hercules. She made Hercules lazy and tired. Instead of leading other warriors into battle and defending his home, Hercules spent his days sleeping. Without his leadership, his town fell to the enemy. When the spell was broken, Hercules was horrified by what had happened while he slept so comfortably.

Hercules was haunted by what he had done. What could he do to make up for the shame of not defending his town and his neighbors? He prayed to the gods and sought their advice. The god Apollo said that as punishment, Hercules must perform twelve labors, or tasks. These labors would be assigned to him by the evil King Eurystheus, whom Hercules must serve for twelve years. If Hercules completed all twelve labors, his shame would be erased from his soul, and the gods would make him immortal.

How does the excerpt reflect the idea of heroism in Greek mythology?

The excerpt shows how the heroes in Greek mythology are allowed to be lazy.
The excerpt shows how the heroes in Greek mythology are expected to fight in battle.
The excerpt shows how the heroes in Greek mythology are supposed to be perfect.
The excerpt shows how the heroes in Greek mythology are always liked by the gods and goddesses. .

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Answer:

I don't know for sure, but I'm guessing between b or c immana guess b.

Answer:

B. Sorry if i'm wrong

Explanation:

can someone help n think of what he meant by sayin thattt please n thank you

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Answer:

From peaceful acts, such as protesting, no violence will occur and therefore people involved in those acts will experience little to no bad karma. On the other hand, people who riot and cause harm will experience negative results. This is because people will fear those who were demanding rights instead of acting rationally, and they will lose respect for those peaceful people that were standing up for the same rights, similarly to what is happening now days with the BLM protests.

The Civil War was the bloodiest conflict in the history of the United States. More
than 600,000 soldiers lost their lives. The fighting took place in many different cities
and throughout the countryside. The wounded often suffered acute pain while in the
field hospitals. They all should have asked for the better care. William Hammond, the
surgeon general of the Union army, created a new system of sanitary field care. If
people do not accept Hammond as the most important person from the Civil War,
they have no understanding of the war. Select the sentence in this passage that
demonstrates the fallacy of oversimplification.


A : The Civil War was the bloodiest conflict in the history of the United States. More
than 600.000 soldiers lost their lives.


B : The fighting took place in many different cities and throughout the countryside.



C : They all should have asked for the better care.



D : William Hammond, the surgeon general of the Union army, created a new
system of sanitary field care.

I need help on this one anyone know the answer?

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I think the answer is C

Please help me with this question.​

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Look man you better guess lol

Read the paragraph.

Last summer, my family took a vacation to the sandy beaches of Mexico. I will never forget the first time I laid eyes upon the majestic waves of the Pacific Ocean. I knew then and there that my greatest passion had blossomed and that one day I would become a marine biologist.

Based on the author’s word choice, what is the purpose of the paragraph?

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Answer:

to inform about how or why they decided to become a marine biologist

Explanation:

it's a borderline entertainment, but I think it's more of an imformative

Answer:

I think its B)

Explanation:

The author is narrating his/her story

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