Instructions: Copy and paste the following text into a document or create a document that contains the same information.
Using your essay in response to the unit's writing prompt, complete the following steps to improve your essay.
Introduction
Insert your introductory paragraph. Include any revisions your instructor asked you to make.
Idea Development
Write the body and conclusion of your essay in the space below.
Highlight each paragraph according to the stoplight approach:
Green = Topic sentence
Yellow = Example, reason, detail, or fact
Red = Explanation of example, reason, detail, or fact
Based on your highlighting, what are the areas of your essay that need development?
Incorporate two additional or different examples to better support the controlling idea of this essay. Paste the examples below and identify your revisions by underlining.
Choose two examples and improve the explanations of them. Be sure your explanations show how the examples prove the points of their paragraphs. In the space below, paste your paragraphs and identify your explanation revisions by underlining.
Idea Development
Paste all of your revised body paragraphs and conclusion in the space below. Bold the transitions (link to transition list). Remember, transitions are ued between examples and between examples and explanations.
Identify what you have done to synthesize your message throughout this essay, especially in your conclusion.
Include your works cited information below, in MLA format.
Answer:
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Please write 4-5 sentences about what you see in this image.
Answer:
Explanation:
I see Three helicopters ,each one has one person outside the helicopter and one inside .I Also took notice that they might be training since the height of the helicopter isn't that high .The background isn't a battle field one.
Which quotation from the passage encompasses the climax of the story?
Answer:
The correct answer is C) “‘Oh, very badly!’ said she. ‘I have scarcely closed my eyes all night.’”
The quotation from the passage that encompasses the climax of the story is "‘Oh, very badly!’ said she. ‘I have scarcely closed my eyes all night.’”
We are talking about an excerpt from the story "The Princess and The Pea," written by Hans Christian Andersen. The author writes it in the following way: "On this, the princess had to lie all night. In the morning she was asked how she had slept. "Oh, very badly!” said she. "I have scarcely closed my eyes all night. Heaven only knows what was in the bed, but I was lying on something hard so that I am black and blue all over my body. It’s horrible!”
"The Princess and The Pea," is a tale published in 1835. Hans Christian Andersen (1805-1875) was a talented writer that also produced great tales such as "The Little Mermaid."
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Please help hurry 2 questions
in what way does a recent war influence the knight's actions?
which is correct?????
Answer:
Relatives
Explanation:
Just makes sense sorry if its wrong
Answer:
(A) Relatives :
I hope this helps :)
As in the definition it says “one's family and relations”
PLEASE HELP!!!! Write an introduction to the essay and introduces a clear claim that supports keeping art and music classes in public schools.
PLEASE HELP
Answer:
Read Explanation!
Explanation:
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Music, and art are both fundamental courses in student lives. It teaches, creativity, and encourages students to think about things differently than they usually would. Music can play a huge role in a student's life by helping them cope, or even just 'pumping them up' when they want to be in a good mood. Art encourages out-of-the-box thinking, and this is vital in everyday life for adults! For example, if you need a job, you'll apply, but if your application isn't special or different fro any of the other generic applicants, you most likely won't get the job. If your application blows the employer out of the water, you are significantly more likely to get the job. This is all apart of creative thinking that can come from art and music in schools. Music and art both need to be incorporated in schools to teach fundamental concepts that keep students unique and creative!
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The Great Gatsby
What does the comment about "fundamental decencies" by Nick tell you about him, his
perceptions of himself and others, and his understanding of his father's advice?
Nick's comment on "fundamental decencies" shows that he understood that his father's advice was within society's moral values, however, he allows himself to circumvent that advice and issue judgments, but keep it to himself.
We can arrive at this answer because:
Nick is a man who judges people constantly.However, he keeps his judgments to himself, as he knows it's not right to divulge them.This is because judging people is not a moral value established by society.He learned this from his father, who stated that he must not judge anyone.So Nick can see non-judgment as part of the "fundamental decencies" established in society, which are presented as correct, but which are not always followed by everyone.
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what are followers of islam called?
Answer:
Muslims
Explanation:
The word Islam means submission to the will of God. The followers of Islam are called:
Muslims. Who are Muslims?Muslims are people who follow and practice Islam. They aim to live a life in complete submission to Allah.
The Muslims are generally known to be followers of the Islam.
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1- The In the poem "The Soul selects her own Society," Dickinson uses the sound
device of alliteration in lines 1-2 to -
A) emphasize the importance of the theme
B) enhance the rhythmic quality of the poem
C) describe how the soul appears to the poet
D) allude that the soul is a living creature
Answer:
B
Explanation: The lines are what important the title isnt relating to the question
write the correct word in the black
AM. IS. ARE.
2. They going to run now. 3. The flower pretty. 4. He from California. 5. They eating lunch. 6. She a teacher. 7. I Carlos. 8.I hungry. 9. He an underwater archeologist. 10. She sad. 11. You very tall 12. She surprised. 13. We 13 years old. 14. Jack from Colombia. 15. The dog black and small. 16. The door open. 17. My dad a doctor 18. Juan and Edgar friends. 19. My brother and i from Peru. 20. I a student at Jorge Mas Canosa. 21. Those nice jeans. 22. Jeans and sneakers casual. 23. A tie and suit formal. 24. My uniform new 25. My parents here.
Answer:
Answer below
Explanation:
2. are
3. is
4. is
5. are
6. is
7. am
8. am
9. is
10. is
11. are
12. is
13. are
14. is
15. is
16. is
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18. are
19. are
20. am
21. are
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25. are
Any points for why a lack of self control IS NOT the reason for obesity?
Answer:
-Eating disorders
-Upbringing
-Lack of exercise
-Genetics
-Diseases
Emilee is the head of a large veterinary hospital. She takes care of many duties to keep the hospital up and running. That is why Emilee has put Alonzo in charge of Human Resources. What types of duties might Alonzo have in this position? Does allowing Alonzo to handle things like hiring new vet techs or filing the employee health insurance forms mean that Emilee does not care about the hospital? Explain how Alonzo’s position benefits Emilee in her job.
Answer: Emilee does care about the hospital. She has other duties that she must finish too, so Alonzo is helping her out with that. Alonzo gets to interview and hire new staffs.
Explanation:
Which event caused our energy needs to skyrocket ?
French Revolution
American Revolution
Industrial Revolution
Russian Revolution
Answer: The Industrial Revolution
Answer: Adoption of Marxism
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Activity 2:Reason out!
Claim of fact
Reason;
Generalization:
Claim of policy;
Reason;
Generalization:
Claim of value;
Reasons:
Generalization
what does the root cred mean in the word credulous
I think it’s means believe!
Answer:
The Latin root word cred means “believe.” This Latin root is the word origin of a good number of English vocabulary words, including credit, credo, and credentials. The Latin root word cred is easily recalled through the English word incredible, for if something incredible happens it can hardly be “believed.”
Explanation:
Can someone type this up for me
Answer:
Should I type it on a Docs for you?
Explanation:
I need a 10 line poem on a wonderful transformation can you imagine what it might be like to transform into something different?
Answer:
Here's your answer, hope it helps!
Explanation:
To think of time—of all that retrospection!
To think of to-day, and the ages continued henceforward!
Have you guess'd you yourself would not continue?
Have you dreaded these earth-beetles?
Have you fear'd the future would be nothing to you?
Is to-day nothing? Is the beginningless past nothing?
If the future is nothing, they are just as surely nothing.
To think that the sun rose in the east! that men and women
were flexible, real, alive! that everything was alive!
To think that you and I did not see, feel, think, nor bear our
part!
To think that we are now here, and bear our part!
2
Not a day passes—not a minute or second, without an
accouchement!
Not a day passes—not a minute or second, without a corpse!
The dull nights go over, and the dull days also,
The soreness of lying so much in bed goes over,
The physician, after long putting off, gives the silent and terrible
look for an answer,
The children come hurried and weeping, and the brothers and sisters
are sent for,
Medicines stand unused on the shelf—(the camphor-smell has
long pervaded the rooms,)
The faithful hand of the living does not desert the hand of the dying,
The twitching lips press lightly on the forehead of the dying,
The breath ceases, and the pulse of the heart ceases,
The corpse stretches on the bed, and the living look upon it,
It is palpable as the living are palpable.
The living look upon the corpse with their eye-sight,
But without eye-sight lingers a different living, and looks curiously
on the corpse.
3
To think the thought of Death, merged in the thought of materials!
To think that the rivers will flow, and the snow fall, and fruits ripen,
and act upon others as upon us now—yet not act upon us!
To think of all these wonders of city and country, and others taking
great interest in them—and we taking no interest in them!
To think how eager we are in building our houses!
To think others shall be just as eager, and we quite indifferent!
(I see one building the house that serves him a few years, or seventy
or eighty years at most,
I see one building the house that serves him longer than that.)
Slow-moving and black lines creep over the whole earth—they never
cease—they are the burial lines,
He that was President was buried, and he that is now President shall
surely be buried.
4
A reminiscence of the vulgar fate,
A frequent sample of the life and death of workmen,
Each after his kind:
Cold dash of waves at the ferry-wharf—posh and ice in the river,
half-frozen mud in the streets, a gray, discouraged sky overhead,
the short, last daylight of Twelfth-month,
A hearse and stages—other vehicles give place—the funeral
of an old Broadway stage-driver, the cortege mostly drivers.
Steady the trot to the cemetery, duly rattles the death-bell, the gate
is pass'd, the new-dug grave is halted at, the living alight, the
hearse uncloses,
The coffin is pass'd out, lower'd and settled, the whip is laid on the
coffin, the earth is swiftly shovel'd in,
The mound above is flatted with the spades—silence,
A minute—no one moves or speaks—it is done,
He is decently put away—is there anything more?
He was a good fellow, free-mouth'd, quick-temper'd, not bad-looking,
able to take his own part, witty, sensitive to a slight, ready with
life or death for a friend, fond of women, gambled, ate hearty,
drank hearty, had known what it was to be flush, grew low-spirited
toward the last, sicken'd, was help'd by a contribution, died, aged
forty-one years—and that was his funeral.
Thumb extended, finger uplifted, apron, cape, gloves, strap, wet-weather
clothes, whip carefully chosen, boss, spotter, starter, hostler,
somebody loafing on you, you loafing on somebody, headway, man before
and man behind, good day's work, bad day's work, pet stock, mean
stock, first out, last out, turning-in at night;
To think that these are so much and so nigh to other drivers—and
he there takes no interest in them!
chapter 4 to kill a mockingbird summary
Answer:
The rest of the school year passes grimly for Scout, who endures a curriculum that moves too slowly and leaves her constantly frustrated in class. After school one day, she passes the Radley Place and sees some tinfoil sticking out of a knothole in one of the Radleys’ oak trees. Scout reaches into the knothole and discovers two pieces of chewing gum. She chews both pieces and tells Jem about it. He panics and makes her spit it out. On the last day of school, however, they find two old “Indian-head” pennies hidden in the same knothole where Scout found the gum and decide to keep them.
Summer comes at last, school ends, and Dill returns to Maycomb. He, Scout, and Jem begin their games again. One of the first things they do is roll one another inside an old tire. On Scout’s turn, she rolls in front of the Radley steps, and Jem and Scout panic. However, this incident gives Jem the idea for their next game: they will play “Boo Radley.” As the summer passes, their game becomes more complicated, until they are acting out an entire Radley family melodrama. Eventually, however, Atticus catches them and asks if their game has anything to do with the Radleys. Jem lies, and Atticus goes back into the house. The kids wonder if it’s safe to play their game anymore.
Consider the vocabulary words from the poem "We Wear the Mask."
Which sentence correctly uses the word fused?
O. Marie and Alma set off on a hike but became fused on which way to go at a fork in the trail.
O Even though it was raining, our cat, Butters, fused to come inside.
O Trent unknowingly left the stove on, and the spatula fused to the cooktop.
O During the storm, a tree limb fused and fell on our neighbor's car.
The sentence which correctly uses the word "fused" is "Trent unknowingly left the stove on, and the spatula fused to the cooktop." (option C)
The meaning of "fused"The verb "to fuse" is used to talk about something that has melted or something that has been blended or joined with something else. With this definition in mind, we can already eliminate options A, B, and D.
Option C is the correct answer. If Trent has left the stove on, that means the spatula ended up melting due to the heat and sticking to the cooktop. In other words, the spatula fused to the cooktop.
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which list shows the plot elements in the correct order
Answer:
The correct answer
Exposition, inciting incident, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution.
Explanation:
Exposition: is the background information on the characters and setting explained at the beginning of the story
Inciting Incident: the event that sets the main character or characters on the journey that will occupy them throughout the narrative.
Rising Action: Beginning with the inciting incident, rising action is the bulk of the plot.
Climax: the highest or most intense point in the development or resolution of something.
Falling Action: what happens near the end of a story after the climax and resolution of the major conflict.
Resolution: finding an answer or solution to a conflict, problem.
Hope this helps!✌️Which theme does the passage most convey? Unrequited love is still timeless. Youth is fleeting and fickle. Music is the spice of life. True beauty is found in nature.
The theme that can be conveyed in the passage is A. Unrequited love is still timeless.
The theme of a passage simply means the central idea that is in the passage. It's simply what the author wants the readers to know.
In the passage, the speaker is encouraging someone that's in love with another person but doesn't get the same love back. It shows that unrequited love is still timeless.
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Answer:
A.
Explanation:
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Write a one paragraph description of a familiar creature: a pet, a farm animal, a zoo
animal, or local wildlife. Use at least three vivid images to show the creature in an
unexpected way. Include at least one image appealing to a sense other than sight.
Answer:
I was hanging out with my pet dog rosco and he was playing fetch with me.He was a very cool dog but sometimes he has his bad days he then died to aids the next day.
Explanation:
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A thesis statement about American football pls pls asap so important
Answer: Thousands of hours of relentless training, along with even more time spent thinking about how to be the best at your assignment, all goes into a suspenseful yet exhilarating two hours. This is football. Football is arguably America’s favorite sport and is loved by millions. This sport can be played competitively from highschool to professiona
Explanation:
In "Garden of My Childhood" Chang uses the garden as a metaphor for _____.
1. freedom
2. his past
3. love
4. his country
Exercise 1: Choose the word that is stressed differently from that of the other words.
1. A. eggshell B. diet C. album D. locate
The word that is stressed differently from the other words.
1. A. eggshell B. diet C. album D. locate
Album
Stress can be defined to as laying emphasis on a particular syllable in a word. It can also be emphasis on a word in a phrase or sentence.The stressed syllable is usually pronounced loudly than other syllable. Stress could either be on the first, second, third or fourth syllable in a word.Therefore, the word that is stressed differently from that of the other words is album
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The phone calls that Tom receives during the dinner are an indicator that he is trying to prevent his marriage from failing. He and Daisy are not a happily married couple. He would rather be in the city than on the island. He has important business deals in the works.
The phone calls received by Tom have been an indicator of Tom and Daisy are not a happily married couple. Thus, option A is correct.
The given passage has been from chapter 1 of the novel, "The Great Gatsby," by F. Scott Fitzgerald.
The novel has been about the married life of Tom and Daisy and Tom's affair with a lower-class woman. During the meeting, Tom has been continuously receiving calls. This leads to the initiation of the talks about the married life of Tom and Daisy.
The continuous calls indicate Tom has had an affair, which makes Nick suspicious. Jordan has been aware of Tom's affair.
Thus, the phone calls have been depicting that Tom and Daisy are not a happily married couple. Thus, option A is correct.
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Answer:
The phone calls that Tom receives during the dinner are an indicator that
he is trying to prevent his marriage from failing. he and Daisy are not a happily married couple.<<<CORRECThe would rather be in the city than on the island.he has important business deals in the works.Explanation:
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Also, when I gave the answer given above, it was Incorrect. So I went searching. and two others said it was B.
Example:
Find the word whose underlined part is pronounced differently from the others.
A. grow
B. brow
C. power
D. prow
Power is pronounced differently from the others. So, the correct option is (C).
What is Homophones?A homophone is defined as a word that is pronounced the same as another word but differs in meaning. It also differs in spelling. The two words may be spelled the same.
For example,
Rose and rose are same but have different meanings.
Rain, reign, and rein spelled differently but have same pronunciation
These are two or more words which have the same pronunciation, but different spellings or meanings.
Thus, power is pronounced differently from the others. So, the correct option is (C).
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I look at the world
From awakening eyes in a black face —
And this is what I see:
This fenced-off narrow space
Assigned to me.
I look then at the silly walls
Through dark eyes in a dark face —
And this is what I know:
That all these walls oppression builds
Will have to go!
I look at my own body
With eyes no longer blind —
And I see that my own hands can make
The world that's in my mind.
Then let us hurry, comrades,
The road to find.
Which detail from the poem best shows how the speaker wants to change the world?
A
"This fenced-off narrow space / Assigned to me." ( Lines 4-5)
B
"I look then at the silly walls / Through dark eyes in a dark face — " ( Lines 6-7)
C
"That all these walls oppression builds / Will have to go!" ( Lines 9-10)
D
"I look at my own body / With eyes no longer blind — " ( Lines 11-12)
Option C is the one that best represents how the speaker wants to change the world. This sentence states that:
"That all these walls oppression builds / Will have to go!" (Lines 9-10)
We can arrive at this answer because:
The speaker of the poem shows how he feels overwhelmed by the things going on around him.He feels like the walls are oppressing him and coming closer to him to reinforce that oppression.This makes him feel that this situation he is inserted in needs to change, but for that, he must cause the change, get up and do something.The speaker understands that he should not wait for the change to occur without provoking it, so he decides to go and promote it.
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Answer: The answer is splendid.
However, I would like to see the full image or PDF to understand what it is asking to identity.
Answer:
Answer: sudden
Explanation:
The rain seems to be sudden since they were not prepared for the rain, no time to grab an umbrella, so therefore it has to be sudden.