revise the following essay so that it's more appropriate for the task, purpose, and audience described in the prompt.

Prompt.write an argumentative essay aimed at your a state legislator that explains a few problems related to climate change and argues for reasonable change that ordinary people can make to help these problems
ESSAY.one way that we can help keep climate change from getting worse is by using public transportation rather than individual cars whenever possible. These changes in heat affect the entire Globes climate but not always in the same way. One outcome of climate change is extreme weather-not just extreme heat or drought, but also tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and other disasters that used to happen just once in a blue moon. Climate change is the result of carbon emissions in the atmosphere trapping heat that would normally leave through the ozone. Cars are responsible for 28% of carbon emissions in the United States if each person rode the bus just one day a week carbon emissions could be reduced by almost 40% ​

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Answer 1

Answer:

Climate change is the result of carbon emissions in the atmosphere trapping heat that would normally leave through the ozone.

One outcome of climate change is extreme weather-not just extreme heat or drought, but also tornadoes, hurricanes, floods and other disasters that used to happen just once in a blue moon. These changes in heat affect the entire Globes climate but not always in the same way.

One way that we can help keep climate change from getting worse is by using public transportation rather than individual cars whenever possible, because cars are responsible for 28% of carbon emissions in the United States if each person rode the bus just one day a week carbon emissions could be reduced by almost 40%

Explanation:

The text has been reorganized, to present a more fluid and coherent structure, showing the information in the order in which they would best achieve the objective of the text and allows a full understanding of the audience.

The word "because" was added in the last paragraph to increase the fluidity of the text. In addition, the reorganization of paragraphs makes the text more coherent and cohesive.


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Read the claim below.
American children should start learning a foreign language in elementary school.
Select the two pieces of evidence that best support this claim.

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Answer:

1. foreign language study encourages and builds mental flexibility, superiority in concept formation, and diversification of cognitive abilities.

2.those who have studied foreign languages retain these cognitive benefits well into adulthood and old age.

Answer:

First of all, if someone wants to see outcome soon, one must start sooner. To be more precise, brain ability in learning new language reduces with growing up. Additionally, scientists claim that unlike the misconception of parents, children do not confuse the words of their mother tongue with a studied language, but they learn more efficiently.

Secondly, learning a new language can broaden children’s horizon because of enhancing their social skills. When they learn a foreign language, they become more interested in that country and can make a connection with more easily. Moreover, they can cope with their future issues related to their field of study by having access to the variety of sources presented in their second language.

Explanation:

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How do the descriptions in this passage support Tan’s purpose? Descriptions show that Amy’s father pretends she likes things that she does not. Descriptions show that Amy cannot make up her mind whether to be American or Chinese. Descriptions show an example of how Amy sees two cultures reacting to food differently.

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Answer:

C). Descriptions show an example of how Amy sees two cultures reacting to food differently.

Explanation:

The descriptions provided in the given excerpt from 'Fish Cheeks' that function to support Tan's claim is that 'they display an instance of how Amy perceives two cultures' response towards food in different manner.' This distinction in the Chinese and American culture helps the readers' in understanding that the different cultures have distinct customs but one must not be ashamed of their native culture. Thus, option C is the correct answer.

Answer:

Amy Tan uses details to show that her family's meal was embarrassing. Her description of her father burping uses imagery because the reader can imagine hearing her father's burp. The guests are astonished, which means they are shocked, because this custom is different. Robert's red face is another description that helps the reader picture him being embarrassed as well. The minister's burp is quiet, and he seems embarrassed by the custom too. Amy says this moment made her silent for the rest of the night, which shows that she is embarrassed.

Explanation:

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How does physical water scarcity compare to economic water scarcity?

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Answer:

Physical water scarcity occurs when there is not enough water to meet all demands. ... Economic water scarcity is caused by a lack of investment in water or a lack of human capacity to satisfy the demand for water, even in places where water is abundan

Explanation:

What is a mutually??...

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answer:

with mutual action or in a mutual relationship.

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Answer:

with mutual action in a mutual relationship

Can you guys tell me metaphors on the poem Hill we climb PLS

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Answer:

do you have a link to the poem?

There is one mistake in each of the sentences:
He was going to buy three things: chairs, tables and utensils.

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Answer: He was going to buy three things: chairs, tables, and utensils.

Explanation:

The most basic rule for using commas is that they are used to separate independent clauses joined by coordinating conjunctions (and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet).

However, it might be difficult to remember that this rule still applies when we want to separate three or more words, phrases, or clauses written in a series. We must not forget to place a comma before "and".

your claim must have
2 - 3 supporting reasons
an emotional appeal
4 supporting reasons
none of the above

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2-3 supporting reasons

Which of these is most likely to be found in historical documents?
facts
thoughts and feelings
opinions
insights about life

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Answer:

Facts

Explanation:

Answer:

Facts

Explanation:

Significant historical documents can be deeds, laws, accounts of battles (often given by the victors or persons sharing their viewpoint), or the exploits of the powerful. Though these documents are of historical interest, they do not detail the daily lives of ordinary people, or the way society functioned.

What is The Wanderer lamenting?

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Answer: a lament for the things that the speaker lost.

Explanation: It's also a reflection on what wise people learn from their life experiences.

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Answer: I have a feeling that the answer is (C)

I think its option C

Explanation:

It feels like its C, I think it best revises the passage

What is something positive that the writer learns from her experience? Write a response in which you explain what Ahmedi learns and describe the characters and events that led to her realization

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Answer:

who is ahmedi

Explanation:

what does the word "deindividuation mean as used in parapgraph 7

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Answer:

in situations in which they believe they cannot be personally identified

Explanation:

ummm in groups or maybe large crowds

How did Fredrick Henry's view of war change in farewell to arms

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One could argue that he didn't pay much mind towards the war he involved himself in at first, but once he did, he became less enthusiastic about it as he became more aware.

Read the sentence. On Monday mornings, the anxious gardeners watch VERY CAREFULLY for the INCREASINGLY rare visits by the bees and other insects. Which of the all capital adverbs describe anothed adverb?
increasingly
carefully
very​

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Answer: very

Explanation:

The adverb describing another adverb is "very". An adverb is simply referred to a word that helps in modifying an adjective, verb, phrase, a clause or another adverb.

Here, the adverb "very" is modifying "carefully". It is simply adverb of degree as it shows how intense something is.

What did the train pass as it was getting dark? ( A canary for one)

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

Read A Canary for One, by Ernest Hemingway

What did the train pass as it was getting dark?

Answer: a farmhouse burning in a field

Explanation:

After leaving the station in Marseilles, the sun setting in the water could be seen from the train. It was getting dark when the train passed a farmhouse that was burning. There were many cars around, as well as many people watching the burning building, while things were taken from inside the farmhouse to spread them in the field, safe from the fire.

what is the role of ethics in setting international issues such as teritorial dispute, human rights violations and war?

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Explanation:

duspute any thing that combines

Answer:

A

Explanation:

Can you please help me with this it’s based on a wrinkle in time here is what I need help with please make sure it’s all correct I will mark brainliest for whoever answers these questions first.

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T
F
a
a
c
d
Charles wallace can’t talk
C
Ghosts
b

Can someone help me answer this question?

What does nature being cruel look like to you?

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Answer:

Nature being cruel can look like multiple things, such as:

Explanation:

1.) A baby animal being eaten by the stronger animals

2.) A vine choking and killing a tree out

3.) A baby bird being thrown from its nest by its mother for being sick, underweight, etc.

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Write a diary entry overcoming a fear/phobia
Plz sum1 that can help would appreciate it

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Answer:

The purpose of a panic attack diary to track your triggers, symptoms, and progress to help you more effectively cope with your condition. All you need to get started is paper, a pen, and some quiet time to write down this information.

Explanation:

Overcoming FEAR Our second principle for better self-empowerment is the overcoming of fear in general. Fear is a part of our lives. It appears when we are uncertain or faced with something new. It is natural to feel this way, but it can become a problem when it rules our every decision.

Answer:

Dear Diary,

Explanation:

Hey again, I have been pondering how to put my experiences into the correct words, but here is my  attempt.

Today is the day, January 22, 2021. From my other entries, you can probably tell that I have a slight fear of heights. Acrophobia is  the technical term for it I guess. Anyway, I have an extreme fear. Like even looking down the steps to get to my room is terrifying.  My way to fix this? Exposure therapy. My parents bought a ladder just for this about a year ago, and to my protest, they hid the ladder. Until today, I never knew where the ladder was. But today,   I found out. It was in a closet where we kept the food. Right under my nose. Anyway, their plan was to expose me to my own direction of how high my height scares would amount to. To help my fear, they made me climb one step at a time. Yes, of course, I try to say no, but since I would really like to play my XBOX after, I bite my tongue. As I tremble over step over step, not looking down at all, I realize that I have climbed 8 steps already. How could this be?" I am even afraid to look at my stairs, much less a ladder! But then the 9th step. I look down, and almost fall over. Lucky, my father caught me

We repeat this over and over for a week

A WEEK LATER

We decide to try again. Little steps at a time lead me to the 8th step again. The nerves of my family sometimes.. UGH. But when my father tells me to keep going, I do. Slowly taking the step to the 9th..

and the 10th

and the 11th.

Reaching the final step, I look down. Somehow, it doesnt scare me as much anymore. This must be working!

Fast forward to now. I am still a bit scared, but not as much.

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Where is the passage :(

!!!!Please help!!!!! 15 points!!! "Create a timeline of the major publications in Gothic literature since the inception of this genre. You may want to begin with the publication of The Castle of Otranto in 1764 and end with the publication of Dracula in 1897. Include at least 10 major works in your timeline. Also, make a note of any major historical events that occurred when the books you list were published and consider their possible significance on the content of the literary works at the time."

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Answer: Ann Radcliffe helps to define what makes a Gothic novel and enjoys massive commercial success.

In her best-known novel, The Mysteries of Udolpho, Radcliffe introduces ‘the explained supernatural’, a technique by which terrifying, apparently supernatural incidents have a logical explanation. Over the course of her previous novels, Radcliffe developed the formula of ‘the female Gothic’, first introduced in The Recess by Sophia Lee. The formula is perfected in Udolpho, and has since become a Gothic norm

Explanation:

Any decisions required

out of

total votes?

A

10 out of 12

B

9 out of 13


7 out of 13

D

9 out of 12

I need help with government plzzzz

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Answer:

not 100% sure but I think it's option A

The bag of groceries on the kitchen table
1. What's missing? The subject or verb?
2. Write a complete sentence for the fragment above.
Question 2 (2 points)
After the rain stopped
1. What's missing? The subject or veb?
2. Write a complete sentence with the fragment above.

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Answer:

Verb | Sentence: The bag of grocerise is on the kitchen table

Explanation:

You need a verb like Is or Are to comeplete the sentence

increases.
2. Kinetic energy increases as
A. O weight
B. O speed
C. O both A and B
D. O none of the above

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Answer:

C both  A and B

In the case when the kinetic energy is increased so the weight and speed are increased. Therefore, option c is correct.

What is kinetic energy?

It is the form of energy where an object or the particle should be the reason for the motion.

In this, if there is a transfer of energy so here an object should be applied the net force which increased the speed and weight of an object.

Hence, option c is correct.

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If your boss ask who is willing to work overtime for a large bonus, would you shout me or I ? Justify the choice.

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I would shout “me” because “me” is the object pronoun, used as the object (or receiver) of the action of the verb (as in this case).

I will shout me because I am not using it in a sentence.

32. Which idea do the authors of both "Eat Local"
and "Let Them Eat Bananas" use to support
their different positions?
A Food production gives people jobs.
B
Food grown locally often tastes
better.
C Food grown locally can be more
expensive.
Food transportation increases global
warming.

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Answer:

Food transportation increases global

warming.

A. Underline the independent clause in each sentence below.
1. We arrived last because we couldn't find the theatre.
2. The play started before we found our seats.
3. We got one of the special programs that were being sold.
4. When the play was over, the audience applauded.
5. After we saw the show, we went for a walk.
6. Although the night was cool, the walk was enjoyable.
7. While we were walking, I noticed the moon.
8. Since it was a full moon, it was shining brightly.
9. We walked along the lake until it became very late.
10. By the time I got home, it was almost midnight.

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Answer:

1. We couldn't find the theatre

2. The play started

3.We got one of the special programs

4. The audience applauded

5. We went for a walk.

6. The walk was enjoyable

7. I noticed the moon

8. It was shining brightly

9. We walked along the lake

10. It was almost midnight

Answer:

1. We couldn't find the theatre

2. The play started

3.We got one of the special programs

4. The audience applauded

5. We went for a walk.

6. The walk was enjoyable

7. I noticed the moon

8. It was shining brightly

9. We walked along the lake

10. It was almost midnight

Explanation:

The clauses are all actions.

Mr.Rashid is a good student____who stood first in the classroom.​

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What is the question

Answer:

tell the question i don't see the quetion pls tell it propely

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What is the biggest advantage of using a poster to convey the information in “Loose Talk Can Cost Lives”?

The poster format is useful for people who identify with those in the illustration.


The message is conveyed quickly and completely and appeals to emotions.


The message is so complex it requires both words and pictures to convey.


The poster format is a way to gather people together to discuss the issue they see displayed.

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Answer:

Answer B: The message is conveyed quickly and completely and appeals to emotions.

Explanation:

Based on the information given, the correct option will be B. The message is conveyed quickly and completely and appeals to emotions.

It should be noted that an advantage of using a poster to convey the information in “Loose Talk Can Cost Lives” is that the message is conveyed quickly and completely and appeals to emotions.

This is important as such a message can easily reach a large number of people faster and also appeal to their emotions.

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Her eyes might gaze
toward
distant
stars,
but not for her the lure of Mars.
She’s challenged by a different place,
just as unknown as outer space.
Not for her the stratosphere
but a life-filled, liquid atmosphere—
where she can be… a pioneer!
Down,
down,
down
in
the depths of the sea
where
no human
had gone before.
Down,
down
down
to
the deepest deep—
exploring
the ocean floor

how does the poems physical form help develop its theme?

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Answer:

it has very deep meanings and words, it sets up a sorrow yet innocent theme.

Explanation:

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