Revise this paragraph from the essay on voter identification, which focuses on one of the claim's supporting reasons. As you revise the paragraph, focus on:

1. making sure the point of the paragraph is precise and related to the overall claim in the essay,
2. using words, phrases, and clauses to link major ideas in the paragraph,
3. organizing ideas in a logical way,
4. stating and addressing a counterclaim,
5. maintaining a formal style and objective tone, and
6. correcting MLA citation errors.

Underline any portions of the original paragraph that you include in your version of the paragraph. (30 points).

Paragraph to be revised:

Essay claim: Laws requiring people to show photo identification in order to vote decrease voter participation.

Lots of people don't have photo identification. Requiring people to show photo identification to vote would keep those without this type of identification from voting. Those who often don't have identification include elderly individuals who no longer drive and citizens living in high poverty areas where transportation is limited. They would be denied the chance to vote. Sociologist Mark Abernathy writes, "requiring photo identification in order to vote essentially eliminates a whole population of American voters. These voters are part of society, but they are denied a basic right guaranteed to all Americans over the age of eighteen. Elections are then determined by only a portion of the population, not the entire population" (page 820 of the article "Photo Identification Disenfranchisement"). Some people think this is just not true. Ria Olberson, an economist at Alabaster University, states, "few Americans are without drivers' licenses. Even if the license is expired or revoked, it still counts as photo identification. To claim that requiring identification disenfranchises a segment of the American population is simply inaccurate" (page 101). Olberson is just wrong! A lot of people don't have licenses because they either don't need them or they don't want them. Consider people living in major cities. They have no reason to get driver's licenses: public transportation. This extremely large group of people would be forced to obtain driver's licenses to participate in a process that they are guaranteed as citizens of the United States.

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Answer 1

Essay claim: Requiring voters to present picture identification reduces voter participation.

Many people lack photo identification. Requiring picture identification to vote would keep those without it from voting. Elderly people who no longer drive and people who live in low-income areas often lack identification. They would be unable to vote. Mark Abernathy argues, "Requiring photo ID to vote effectively eliminates a large group of American voters. However, they are denied a basic privilege given to all Americans over the age of 18. A part of the population, not the entire population, decides elections" " (page 820 of the article "Photo Identification Disenfranchisement"). Some believe this isn't true. Ria Olberson of Alabaster University says, "Few Americans lack a license. Even an expired or revoked license counts as photo identification. The idea that requiring identification disenfranchises some Americans is simply false " (page 101). Just just wrong! Many people don't have licenses because they don't need or desire them. Consider city dwellers. They don't need licenses: public transportation. Many of these people would have to get licenses in order to participate in a process  that they are entitled to as U.S. citizens.


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Answer: In this case, both pronouns can be used to complete the sentence as both terms grammatically make sense, however whom is the prefered pronoun.  

Explanation:

The difference between “who” and “whom” is the same as the difference between “I” and “me;” “he” and “him;” “she” and “her;” etc. Who, like other pronouns such as I he, and she, is a subject. So, it is the person performing the action of the verb. On the other hand, whom, acts like me, him, and her in a sentence. It is the object. Therefore, it is the person to/about/for whom the action is being done.

But what does that mean? “Who,” the subjective pronoun, is the doer of an action. For example, “That’s the girl who scored the goal.” It is the subject of “scored” because the girl was doing the scoring. Then, “whom,” as the objective pronoun, receives the action. For instance, “Whom do you like best?” It is the object of “like”.

Who should be used to refer to the subject of a sentence.

Whom should be used to refer to the object of a verb or preposition.

In this case, both pronouns can be used to complete the sentence as both terms grammatically make sense, however, whom is the preferred pronoun.

Pronouns, according to the Merriam-Webster Dictionary, are "any of a small set of words" that are used in place of nouns or noun phrases as well as whose referents are specified or understood in the context.

In a sentence, pronouns such as "you," "we," or "they" stand in for nouns. Most of the time, we refer to individuals using pronouns without giving it a second thought, yet when we're attempting to be inclusive of people of all gender identities, it's critical to take this into account.

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Answer:sure

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Answer:

B ROCKET

Explanation:

I would say rocket because when saying the sentence the words floated,breeze, and gliding, show image of something deligate and gentle while thinking of a rocket it is loud and noisey. That is my opinon tell me if I am wrong. Hope that helps and go shop Quelenasboutique on etsy!

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These texts share different personal views of the same events. Select all the sentences that reflect either Anne Sullivan’s or Helen Keller’s personal thoughts and feelings about the events expressed in the memoirs.


(A) On entering the door I remembered the doll I had broken.


(B) When she wants to know the name of anything, she points to it and pats my hand.


(C) I knew then that "w-a-t-e-r" meant the wonderful cool something that was flowing over my hand.


(D) We went out to the pump-house, and I made Helen hold her mug under the spout while I pumped.


(E) Just then the nurse brought Helen’s little sister into the pump-house, and Helen spelled “baby” and pointed to the nurse.


(F) We had had a tussle over the words "m-u-g" and
"w-a-t-e-r." Miss Sullivan had tried to impress it upon me that
"m-u-g" is mug and that "w-a-t-e-r" is water.


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A,C and G is the answer

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In Gardner's Grendel, how does Grendel classify humans?
A. Barbaric and crazy
B. Ethical and boastful
C. Bloodthirsty and lazy
D. Destiny-driven and ignorant

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In Gardner's Grendel, Grendel classify humans is A. Barbaric and crazy.

Thus, option "A" is correct.

How he classify humans?

Grendel in a Beowulf story was described ambiguously. His qualities are ancients however he is capable of human thoughts such as rationalization and intellectualization.

He could also experience emotions that makes him more human as people in the story observed him. He was also described (in the story) as a ‘resurrected Christ’.

Thus, option "A" is correct.

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Barbaric and crazy

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What would you say when someone asks: "Why do you want to be a tester?"

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Answer:

My answer would depend on what they mean, but I would more than likely say, "Why not?"

swami vivekananda paragraph in 200 words​

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[tex] \huge \sf \:\ {Swami \: \: Vivekananda}[/tex]

"Arise, Awake and Stop not till the Goal is Reached." - said the great sanyasi of India a decade ago.Born on 12th January 1863 in Kolkata, Narendranath Dutta was a scholar since his childhood days. He could remember the Ramayana and the Mahabharata even he had read it once only. He was known for his honesty and devotion. Meditation was a forte to him. He met Sri Ramkrishna in 1881 and became a monk at the age of twenty-five. Then he was named Swami Vivekananda. After Ramkrishna's death, Swamiji went to the West for exploring the culture there and also speaking about his own nation. He was known worldwide after his famous speech in the "Parliament of Religions" took place in Chicago, where people were inspired by his introduction of his speech, "Sisters and Brothers of America". When he came back to India, he made his best to wake up her people. On 1 May 1897 in Calcutta, Vivekananda founded the Ramakrishna Mission for social service. In 1897, he predicted that, India will be free in next 50 years and freedom will appear in an unexpected manner. Truly, India gained independence in 1947, 50 years after his speech. This great hero breathed his last on 4th July 1902 at the young age of 39 years. But he is still in our hearts.

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You have just finished reading chapter 7 of Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe. Upon seeing Okonkwo return from killing Ikemefuna, Nwoye felt something “give way inside him.” Write a narrative story from Nwoye’s point of view emphasizing his feelings about Ikemefuna and Okonkwo at this moment. Your narrative should include imagined actions, thoughts, and dialogue, as long as they are consistent with and connected to the characters in the book

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The question above wants to analyze your ability to read, interpret and write. For that reason, I can't write the text for you, but I'll show you how to write it.

First, you must know that a narrative text is a text that tells a story and for that reason, it has a narrator and characters.

The text you are going to write must have Nwoye as the narrator. He is also a character, which shows that this narration will have a first-person point of view, meaning Nwoye will tell the events he knows and present only his own thoughts and feelings.

Based on that, you should follow the following steps to write your text.

Read the entire text of "Things Fall Apart."Read articles and essays that analyze "Things Fall Apart," its events, and its characters.Understand the impact of the murder of Ikemefuna.Understand Okonkwo's involvement in this murder.Understand how Nwoye sees this event, its consequences, and the people involved in it.

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In a short paragraph of 75 to 100 words, describe each of the characters in "The Water of Life."

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Answer: The faithful servant is a loyal man who carries out the orders of the king, even when the king asks him to accomplish seemingly impossible tasks. The king tries to win the hand of the princess through dishonest means. He asks his faithful servant to do his own tasks. The princess is a beautiful woman who has promised to marry anyone who is able to bring her wise bird back to life. The wise bird has been brought back to life by the water of life, but he quickly realizes that all is not what it seems.

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Answer:

1. interception

2. preoccupation

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Answer:

yes i think

Explanation:

Answer:

Yes.

Explanation:

A: You had better not repeat the same mistake again. Makes no sense.

B. You should not repeat the same mistake again. Correct.

C. You could not repeat the same mistake again. Incorrect. We only use this word in phrases....sometimes.

D. You can not repeat the same mistake again. Ircorrect. No spacing Between Can and not.

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A. so that B. in order that C. although D. A and B are correct

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Answer:

A. so that

B. in order that

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Both are good participal phrases; grammar is good.

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A.
by comparing different types of machines

B.
by stating the Thing had been sent from Mars

C.
by describing the condition of a horse

D.
by hiding where the Thing could not see

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D - hiding where the thing could not see

The narrator develops the theme of the Earth being under attack by hiding where the thing could not see. Thus, option D is correct.

Who is the narrator?

A narrator is a person who writes or narrates a particular incident in his own way. It can be a story or an incident or something that happened to that person on a regular basis.

The narrator can use his own words or can say the exact thing that has happened or even create a story that has not happened in reality.

A narrator develops the theme under attack by using that the thing is hidden somewhere where it could not be seen by anyone, and it is there to protect and that it could not be taken by anyone and misused as the earth was under attack and was in danger. Therefore, option D is the correct option.

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Pen-pals: write letters to an important person from history or the characters in a story that you have learnt in English.(Formal or informal)

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Answer:

Formal

Explanation:

bag contains 8 blue marbles and 5 pink marbles. What is the ratio of pink marbles to blue marbles?

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Answer:

8 TO 5

Explanation:

Song :- Destiny Neffex



Yeah
I don't believe in destiny
I just do what's best for me
Don't listen to my enemies
They're just full of jealousy
Duh
This legacy
You gon see what's left of me
You gon see success in me
You ain't seen the rest of me
I just wanna be the best at what I know
Better than the rest just watch me grow
Put me to the test and watch me go
This is my quest, I'ma make it known
They call me obsessive, oh I know
Call me selective with my notes
Call me agressive with my flow
Call me offensive even though
So we ain't gonna lie, life's tough
Tryna get by, life's rough
Try to do it right, It's not enough
Even though you try you still mess up
But I'm still gonna fight for what I love
Still gonna die for what I love
Still gonna try, I won't give up
Still gonna fight until I've won
They say I'm way too obsessed
And I've got nothing left
And I'm not quite there yet
But those words they'll regret
'Cause I've got something left
And I'm not giving in
I will not let them win
I won't stop till the end
No
I've been through some injuries, mentally and physically
Studied them religiously so I don't repeat history
And people won't admit to me, they don't want a victory
Bad enough to get a seat, they'd rather just go leave it be
And oh, this journey
I've been on since thirteen, working hard and learning
Never stopping searching, yeah
It's burning, all this passion hurts me
I took action working, writing down these words he
No, I'm not okay
I just wanna be something
I don't wanna be nothing
Living all alone
No, I'm not alright
I'm just barely getting by
But I'll tell you I'm just fine
So you leave me alone
They say I'm way too obsessed
And I've got nothing left
And I'm not quite there yet
But those words they'll regret
'Cause I've got something left
And I'm not giving in
I will not let them win
I won't stop till the end
No​

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Answer:

i love that song

Explanation:

Answer:

Hiya There!!!

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I love this song it shares with me my story

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“Everything will be okay in the end. If it's not okay, then it's not the end.”

― Ed Sheeran

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Think of life as a mytery because well it sort of is! You don't know what may happen may be good or bad but be a little curious and get ready for whatever comes your way!! ~Ashlynn

6.
Eos: "Helios? Ha! That's a laugh! Helios doesn't have children!"
(laughter from the others)
A.body language
B.stage directions
C.voice control
D. gestures

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Answer:

Body language

communication in which physical behaviors, as opposed to words, are used to express or convey the information. Such behavior includes facial expressions, body posture, gestures, eye movement, touch and the use of space.

Explanation:

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has to have a exposition, catalyst/inciting incident, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution

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Answer:

Is the anime name another or another anime

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Question 2:Which sentences below use the word turned as a linking verb.
A. The milk turned sour after sitting out on the counter overnight
B. She turned the doorknob but the door was locked
C. Have you turned in your writing assignment yet

Question 3: The word lucid means “clear.”Based on your knowledge of the suffix-ate, what is the most likely meaning of the word elucidate?

A. Clear or transparent
B. Something that is clear
C. To make something clear

Question 3: “Have you decided what you will have for your ____?

A. Entree
B. Dinner

Question 4: “I guess I’ll have the barbecued chicken special,” I __

A. Mumbled
B. Replied

Question 5: Just then, my friend’s cell phone rang, and she began __ through her purse to find it.

A. Digging
B. Looking

Question 7: In this passage from of Wolves and Men, what is revealed about the wolf?

A. His intense playfulness
B. His steadfast loyalty
C. His Obvious aggressiveness
D. His consistent weakness

Question 12: In An Inconvenient Truth, green roofs are beneficial in fighting global warmin because

A. They are beautiful
B. They have solar panels, which collect energy
C. They emit water vapor, which cools the atmosphere
D. They support plants, which filter carbon dioxide from the air

Question 13: In An Inconvenient Truth, the author uses which of the following to emphasize how humans have a chance to improve the atmosphere?

A. The illustration of the sun’s energy as it travels to and from the earth
B. The content under the subheading “What Exactly Are Greenhouse Gases?”
C. The content under the subheading of “Crisis=Opportunity”
D. The chart of “Atmospheric CO2 at Mauna Loa Observatory”

14. Choose the answer that best matches the word in italics.
Some people say they can hear a distracting hum when working under fluorescent lights.
A. Outside visible spectrum
B. Creating light by radiating heat
C. Emitting light by creating water vapor
D. Producing light by adding electrons to a glowing material

4. Who remembers the name of Lyndon Johnson’s dogs?

A. Personal pronoun
B. Reflexive pronoun
C. Interrogative pronoun
D. Indefinite pronoun

5. Identify the choice that best describes the underlined word or words in each sentence.
White House pets often become almost as well known as their owners.

A. Action verb
B. Helping verb
C. Linking verb
D. None of the above

11. In “The Scarlet Ibis,” the narrator foreshadows Doodle’s death in all of the following ways except

A. Showing Doodle the mahogany coffin in the loft
B. The death of the scarlet ibis
C. Choosing the name of an insect--Doodlebug.
D. The description of the setting in the beginning of the story

14. The author of “One Turning Ten” includes the childhood fantasies, such as being invisible or a prince, in order to

A. Show the creativity of the speaker
B. Explain why he no longer rides his bike
C. Contrast the playfulness of younger days with the more serious present.
D. Show how the child narrator spent his time before he was terminally ill.

3. Identify the choice that best describes the underlined word in the sentence.
My friend Jorge can play the guitar and sing.

A. Adverb phrase
B. An incomplete sentence
C. A compound predicate

1. What does Al Gore, author of An Inconvenient Truth, demonstrate about the level of atmospheric carbon dioxide level?

A. Each year, the CO2 level rises and then falls. Over the past 50 years, it has steadily increased.
B. Each year, the CO2 level increases at a faster rate. Over the past 50 years it has nearly doubled.
C. Each year, the CO2 level decreases. Over the past 50 years, it has steadily decreased.

12. Identify the direct object.
The baseball pitcher threw his teammate on first base the ball.

A. Pitcher
B. Teammate
C. First base
D. ball

17. In sentence 4, the underlined word is ___.

A. A predicate
B. A direct object
C. An indirect object
D. A prepositional phrase

18. What is a verb phrase in sentence 5?

A. Would have given
B. Given him
C. Was so
D. Would have

20. Identify the appropriate punctuation for the underlined word or phrase.
My favorite movie is The Empire Strikes Back.

A. Italics
B. Quotation marks
C. Single quotation marks
D. None of the above

1. Which event in “Borders” is an example of a flashback?

A. The mother tells the border guards she is going to visit her daughter in Salt Lake City
B. The narrator drinks an Orange Crush as the family drives Laetitia to the border.
C. The presence of the media convinced the border guards to let the family pass

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2. B
3. C
3. B
4. B
5. A
7. C
12. C
13. B
14. B
4. C
5. D
11. C
14. A
3. C
1. A
12. B
17. ??? Where’s the question
18. ???
20. A
1. B
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Answer:

What the other dud said

Explanation: He is right


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Answer:

B. Luckily, the rain did not start until after lunch recess was over.

Explanation:

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important event in the book the taking of jake livingston?

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Answer:

when he sees dead people everywhere

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Why does the spirit lead Scrooge past brief scenes on the moor, at the lighthouse, and on the ship?

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Yea but he doesn’t know what to do it but I can see if he can get it in his phone before he can get it back up to see if it is ok he can get it done before he gets back from church ⛪️ he will pick it back up at church ⛪️

True or False: Choosing a Green Economy career is one way to benefit from the changing nature of technology.

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Answer:

True

Explanation:

Times change, so it's best to adapt to that change.

Explanation:

true

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This I-ready thing is driving me crazy

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Answer:

That's okay. I have the solution to your problem! The answer is persistent.

Explanation:

Willful: having or showing a stubborn and determined intention to do as one wants, regardless of the consequences or effects.

Bullheaded: determined in an obstinate and unthinking way.

Firm: strongly felt and unlikely to change.

Persistent: continuing firmly or obstinately in a course of action in spite of difficulty or opposition.

So therefore, the answer is persistent.

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