What is the purpose of editing an essay? What kinds of changes should be made during this phase?

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Answer 1

Answer:

Editing is a stage of the writing process in which a writer or editor strives to improve a draft by correcting errors and making words and sentences clearer, more precise, and as effective as possible.

Explanation:


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Frankenstein Do we know The Creature was born good? If so, how do we know? textual evidence​

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Answer:

Both. It was born innocent, and was abused, abandoned, and unloved. It was mistreated by all encountered, and even when it did the right thing it was treated badly. It was made evil by the treatment it received from everyone, but it still made an active decision to become wicked, and he acknowledges that saying he can never change. He is pitiful, and you feel terrible for him, but that doesn't make his actions any less wicked.

Explanation:

I'd say, unloved. He was such a wonderfully intelligent creation. Very sweet and caring, but world is a cruel place for such an innocent mind. More so when your creator hates and abandons you to the wolves.

Which vocabulary word best completes this sentence?
The
student hid in the park to avoid taking her midterm exams.
O prudent
O depreciated
O truant
O compound

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The answer is Truant

Which of the following uses someone else’s exact words?

A) direct quotation

B) summary

C) paraphrase

D) quotation marks

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Answer:

D - Quotation marks

Explanation:

Paragraph of question....
1.What is tree plantation?
2. Which month are suitable for it?
3.How can we take care of it?
4.Why should we plants trees?
5.How can we make people aware of tree plantation

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1. Tree-planting is the process of transplanting tree seedlings, generally for forestry, land reclamation, or landscaping purpose. It differs from the transplantation of larger trees in arboriculture, and from the lower cost but slower and less reliable distribution of tree seeds

2. During rainy season {June to September}

3.

→Water plants regularly.

→Check the soil moisture.

→Pour water at room temperature.

→Give some sunlight or artificial light to plants.

→Use humidifier to maintain surroundings.

→Add fertilizers to the pot to provide nutrients to plant.

→Prune your plant regularly.

4. Trees form the most essential components of our environment. They take in sunlight, carbon dioxide and water to produce oxygen which helps to support all forms of life on earth. ... Timber and wood obtained from trees are used in many industries to make paper, furniture and other goods of daily use.

5.

Aware your friends, family to plant more and more TREES. Save TREES planted in your neighborhood.

→2. Your Blog/ Website

If you own a website or blog then you can post regarding Climate Change, Global Warming and motivate your friend circle to plant TREEs.

→3. Work with NGO’s

You can also work with NGO’s working for social causes. Help them, contribute to them and participate into their events.

→4. Political

If you are in politics then you can aware your supporters regarding Global Warming and Climate Change. Its good stage to spread awareness to lot of people.

which plot element answers all the question raised in the story and ties up all the loose ends?

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Answer:

The conclusion

]

Explanation:

Help Asp it’s in reading about conflict

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Answer:

Person versus nature

Explanation:

"A fierce rain had swollen the middle fork of the Kentucky river."

"The brown water overflowed its muddy banks."

And the epilogue - "Not even a flooded river could stand between Mary Breckinridge and the hospital her patients needed."

The text provides evidence of her going up against the forces of nature rather than the other options.

What does profanity mean?

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Answer:blasphemous or obscene language.(most as inappropriate)

Explanation:

I. He has paid a professional to train the dog for him. TRAINED
He...
by a professional.
2. We asked our neighbour to water our plants while we are away. WATERED
We while we were away.....
3. She hired a famous photographer to take her children's pictures. HAD
She by a famous photographer....

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Answer:

The late nineteenth and early twentieth century was the period of several changing modes of labour process – the slave, the indentured, the contract, and finally the free. These modes historically never appeared as pure types, because much of the availability of labour depended on labour's mobility.

Read the excerpt from "The Red-Headed League

We then went around the corner and walked along the next street. We saw a row of businesses. Holmes pointed to them in order

Which story element in the excerpt would readers most likely relate to their own lives?

plot
theme
character
setting

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Im taking a guess here but I would like to say the answer is Setting. The excerpt is literally setting the scene, a common one at that.

I need HELP!!! What kind of external conflict is the sentence an example of?

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Answer:

Character versus nature

Explanation:

The storm is part of nature which is why he is struggling.

Answer:

Character versus nature

Explanation:

The captain is struggling with keeping his ship afloat because of the raging storm. The character is the captain and the problem involves the raging storm, or nature.

I hope this helps!

Read about Cameron, and then answer the question.

Cameron is revising the conclusion of his argumentative essay. He makes the claim that a beach vacation would be better than a trip to the amusement park.

Which evidence best supports his claim?

Everyone likes to see the dolphins splash in the waves.
Admission to the park is $48 per person, but a beach pass is only $3.
The amusement park is 45 minutes away, but the beach is an hour’s drive.
The new body surfing boards will be lots of fun at the beach.

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Answer:Admission to the park is $48 per person but a beach pass is $3 per person.

Explanation:

we can eliminate answer A & C . Between "the new body surfing boards will be lots of fun " and admission to the park is $8 per person , but a beach pass is only $3 ". Answer B seems more argumentative .

Thank you !

could someone please help me, this is my last question
thank you :)​

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Answer:

For an introductory paragraph here’s what I’d write:

Volunteering in your community is something everyone should try to do at least once in their life. It’ll help out the community despite how small it is! Not only that, but will it apply something good to your record, but colleges will look at that and take that into consideration. Which would boost the acceptance percentage closer to your favor. Volunteer work also can just make more people put trust into you from around the community. In conclusion, volunteer work is something we need more people to help out in, and to help the community.

Explanation:

Now, I’m aware this may not be the best example, but I’ll provide a context below as to why it’s written weirdly like this.

As you’re writing this in a perspective of a student for a positive stand point of community volunteer work, your goal in this paragraph is to favor that making it a persuasive paragraph to get more people in the favor of volunteer work in the community. (If that makes sense).

12. Return to the informational text by Virginia Hamilton from the beginning of this activity. How do the three stories you read exemplify the qualities of creation myths described in the informational text? ​

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Answer:

surely I will be back there

solve pls brainliest

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Answer:

not ok

Explanation:

The loud powerful and steaming train pulled into the station.

add a comma after: ''The loud''

The loud, powerful and steaming train pulled into the station.

the loud, powerful, and steaming train pulled into the station

What are Mr. Palmer portend and energy/requirements? What are his fluid requirements?.

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The question seems incomplete as we do not have a background/statistics for Mr. Palmer Portend. Neither does the question provide a table or information from which his fluid requirements can be calculated.

However, the process for estimating energy requirements is an exact science.

To establish the amount of energy that an individual requires, their energy expenditure also known as Basal Metabolic Rate must be known.The largest expenditure of energy in the body is known as Basal  Metabolic Rate (BMR).BMR is determined by body size, composition, and age.BMR increases or decreases with weight subject to the age of the individual. It is interesting to note that short and light individuals exhibit higher BMR than heavy and tall persons.

Judging from the name, Mr. Palmer is a male. The formula for calculating the BMR of men is given as:

BMR = [88.362 + (10.397 x weight in kilograms) + (4.799 x height in centimeters) ] - [ (5.677 x age in years)].

If Mr. Palmer was a woman, however, the formula would be:

BMR = [447.593 + (9.247 x weight in kilograms) + (3.098 x height in centimeters) ] - [ (4.330 x age in years)].

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How many kilometers in one year

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Answer:

please post the whole question

Answer:

9.461 trillion kilometres

The sentence". the New World, with all its power and might steps forth to the rescue and
liberation of the old is an example of
A. metonymy.
B. a metaphor.
C. personification
D. an analogy

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Answer:

I believe that is is a

Explanation:

What are 2 sentences of simile, hyperbole, metaphor and personification Ps answer I really need it

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Simile
She withered our like a smoked salmon
She howls like an animal whenever she is in pain
Metaphor
I will pronounce your name
She was a commodity on the market
Personification
The whole compound was busy
The ocean is calm

Your best friend has been hospitalized
Write a letter to tell him or her three things
going
On in your
School.

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Answer: (Informal)

Hey, buddy! How are you doing? I know you're going to get better! Ok, guess what happened today in school...

Somebody put a note on the back of (Mean person, insert name) and (mean person) freaked out! It was really funny though. The note said "..."

Also, good job! My friend, the one who gets to hand out graded papers said you got a 99% on your history test! Congrats, dude!

The class pet lizard escaped the classroom! When the teacher found it, it was on her leg! Oh gosh, she started screaming like a little kid! I wish you were here today, you would of cried with laughter!

I really hope you can come back to school before the christmas. I have an amazing present to give you! I think you'll like it!

See ya soon, (get better soon),

from (you)

plzz help
Read the excerpt, and answer the question that follows.

“The Time Traveller (for so it will be convenient to speak of him) was expounding a recondite matter to us. His pale grey eyes shone and twinkled, and his usually pale face was flushed and animated. The fire burnt brightly, and the soft radiance of the incandescent lights in the lilies of silver caught the bubbles that flashed and passed in our glasses. Our chairs, being his patents, embraced and caressed us rather than submitted to be sat upon, and there was that luxurious after-dinner atmosphere, when thought runs gracefully free of the trammels of precision. And he put it to us in this way—marking the points with a lean forefinger—as we sat and lazily admired his earnestness over this new paradox (as we thought it) and his fecundity.”

What mood is created by the imagery Wells uses in this excerpt?

Group of answer choices

Enthusiastic

Disappointed

Tense

Peaceful

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

In his letter to the king of Spain, what did Columbus claim to have discovered?

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Answer:

Columbus claimed to have discovered and taken possession of a series of islands on the edge of the Indian Ocean in Asia, not being aware he was actually on a new continent.

Explanation:

Please help, due by the end of the day.

What does this quote mean?
If you are too rigid in your thinking, you may miss some wonderful opportunities for story telling. -Vince Gilligan

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Answer:

You have to be more openminded when interpreting stories, having a restricting mindset will not allow you to find the deeper meanings that are sometimes hidden within writings symbolically.

Explanation:

thats just what i interpreted from that, hope it helps?

20. __________ money / time
a) hire
b) spend
c) buy
d) stay

21. __________ flights / hotels online
a) buy
b) hire
c) rent
d) book

22. __________ on the beach
a) take
b) spend
c) sunbathe
d) book

23. __________ a bike
a) hire
b) rent
c) book
d) stay

24. Don’t stand __________ the television. I can’t see!
a) on
b) in front of
c) under
d) behind

25. You’ll have to turn round to see it. It’s __________ you.
a) behind
b) in front of
c) on
d) in

26. The dead man was lying __________ the ground.
a) behind
b) in front of
c) on
d) between

27. You can sit __________ that chair. Nobody is sitting there.
a) in front of
b) next to
c) in
d) on

28. We have class ______ eleven o’clock.
a) at
b) in
c) on
d) under

29. Tom has class ______ the morning, and he works ______ the afternoon.
a) at
b) in
c) on
d) under


30. Mary was born ______ October.
a) at
b) in
c) on
d) under

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Answer:

20.c

21.c

22.c

23.b

24.b

25.a

26.c

27d

28.a

29.b

30.c

Hope it helps :D <3

Explanation:

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can someone help me please

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Answer:

look for the notes that are in a shape of a circle

Explanation:

hopefully that helps

What is challenging about poetry?

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Answer:

Poetry is difficult because it consists of the serious compression of information in very few words. One must know the structure, form and literary devices to fully appreciate the work. Poetry is considered to be the most honorable literary genre.

Tone is tough to get at times.Line breaks draw our attention. ... The subject matter and setting may be elusive, leading us to (mistakenly) believe we're reading riddles.Free verse may see like broken up, fragmented prose instead of poetry.

Answer:

The answer is:

Explanation:

Poetry, poetry, poetry. Many people say that they want to become a poet when they grow up (its just a prediction, you don't need to include this, only if you want :D) But do they actually know how hard it is?

Poetry is one of the most hardest subjects in literature, and I don't deny that. Poets have an extremely hard job because they have to make all these songs. Poetry is hard because:

1) You need to make it rhyming, which is really hard.

2) You need to have great ideas to develop a good poem, faulty ideas will get you no where.

3) The grammar should be correct and there should be no spelling mistakes. In a story, this would have been easy, but its not the same thing with a poem.

Hope this helps....

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You witnessed an act of good sportmanship in a sports competition organised this year. Write a diary entry expressing your thoughts and feelings such act of good sportmanship stating why it is important for youths today.​

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Dear diary, today I saw an athlete help one of their competitors by helping them finish the game fairly. That act of kindness brought me joy. It was a very heart-warming act to witness. Mostly because you rarely ever see anyone do something like that when it comes to serious competition.

i tried bro XD

what visible light as the longest wave lenght the shortest wavelenght

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Answer:

Red has the longest wavelength and violet has the shortest wavelength.

Violet has the shortest wavelength, at around 380 nanometers, and red has the longest wavelength, at around 700 nanometers.

Explanation:

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Which two quotes from the selection contain an appositive?
1.Once objects or bones have surfaced, archaeologists can return them to the lab for forensic analysis. . . . (paragraph 12)
2.“Many . . . don’t like the idea of disturbing the dead or buried remains,” Thomas explained. (paragraph 10)
3.They can dig with greater confidence and less collateral damage, apply the latest lab techniques to ancient human artifacts or remains. . . . (paragraph 4)
4.Sarah Parcak, an Egyptologist at the University of Alabama in Birmingham, and an international team recently used infrared satellite imaging. . . . (paragraph 5)
5.Looking at . . . different forms of elements, called isotopes, in the bones of ancient people may reveal what they ate. (paragraph 13)

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Answer:

chu papi

Explanation:

What is the moral of the ""roofleaf"" story told by Nettie in the Color Purple by Alice Walker?

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The moral of the "roofleaf" story from Color Purple by Alice Walker is that greed can be destructive, and the destruction can take a long time to repair.

In Olinka village, they were known to build the roofs over their huts with the roofleaf.

The villagers were accustomed to planting roofleaf for use in the construction and repair of the roofs of their huts. This kept them sheltered from the sun and the rain.

A certain chief, however, became greedy for more cash crops to be sold to the white man that he mandated all villagers to trade more. The villagers did so but at the expense of not planting roofleaf.

In that period, a storm came one day and destroyed their roofs and their houses. Because they had stopped planting the roofleaf, they couldn't do repairs. They had to endure bad weather for months. It was another 5 years before they would have sufficient roofleaf again.

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How does the use of a first-person narrator affect the telling of the story, Snow, above?

The reader is presented with Yolanda's personal view of events.
O The reader sees events through the eyes of several characters.
O The description of events is unbiased,
O Yolanda lies in the story.

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Answer: I believe, since I can’t exactly see the story myself, that it would be “The reader is presented with Yolanda‘s personal view of events.”

Explanation:

First-person gives a unique look at the story from the main character it’s following. From this, it affects how we look at the events and what we are shown since it’s all in the characters eyes and how they take it!

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